Benjy's rough cuts

These are Benjy's versions of our film thus far.

New Title

The opening has been changed to reflect the new font.

Font Feedback

We have recently received feedback on our font dilemma.

The feedback suggests that the original font is more suitable for the film. However some of these suggestions are out of our target audience. Me and Benjy have decided that the new font is better fitting with our film.

Font Comparison

Here is a side by side comparison of the old and new fonts.

Using our original font would challenge the conventions of a high school romantic comedy, but is used effectively. We will use facebook to get feedback on the two fonts as our tutor feels that the new font is institutionally correct.

New Font Suggestion.

Review Analysis

The review begins with a small paragraph explaining the plot of the film. This should likely stay short so that I don't stray off the point. The plotline explanation isn't too detailed, but detailed enough to explain what's going on. The review itself is then kept short to likely avoid putting people off. The review begins by explaining what currently is happening during the film, before explaining why it is or is not entertaining or in-keeping with the genre.

The review goes into what sections fit the genre and how/if they are effective in their goals, before at the end reaching a Verdict (a short sentence concluding the review). The verdict is only one to two sentences long and sums up the review as a whole, I shall use this technique in my own review. There is also a rating out of 5, this film has only been given 3/5 stars, the reasoning is explained in the review.

Technologies for Editing

Adobe Premiere Pro CS5.5
For the main editing, I used Adobe Premiere Pro CS5.5. The software allows me to use arange of different cuts, fades and transitions for my movie. I also used it to create the split screen for me and Benjy during the wedding sequence.

I also used Adobe Flash 8, this is a 2D animation software. I used this for the ending credits, this was a way to get them manually moving upward at my chosen speed.