Final Changes To Be Made.

Beneath is a list of changes that will be made to my final outcome.

• The font will be changed to our new font.
• The opening will have background noise.
• The "Do you want a girlfriend?" Short scene will be removed as it provides no significance to the film.
• Poppy's reaction shot will have background sound added to it.
• The pan as Benjy says "See I don't think it's that bad" is shaky, and the tripod makes a noise, this will be rectified.
• When Benjy says "Look her straight in the face, and say..." I will cut straight to the line as opposed to watching Callum catch up with her.
• The fade to black after Poppy says yes to Callum will be lengthened.
• The montage will be shortened will less jumpy cuts.
• When Callum says "I've got to go to the bathroom", there is no background sound, this will be fixed.
• Benjy's appearance in the bathroom will have faster cuts, and I will shorten the shot where Benjy bumps the camera.
• Other shots will be shortened where there is too much silence.
• There is no sound when Poppy puts the ring on, this will be changed.
• The credits font will also be changed

These changes will be made and uploaded shortly.